Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Michael's arrival

Waking up my eyes a gust and I see myself lying on my belly. I look up and spit all the hard sand and bitter salty water out of my mouth. I lift my self up on my two exhausted feet and yell "STELLA" I see her charging from around the corner with a large spiky rotten stick that looked like seaweed. I threw it into the sea and she ran in for it, as I looked at the sea I saw sparkly blue waves crashing over each other one by one. When I turned around I saw coconut trees,palm trees,fruit trees and bushes,swaying in the cold breeze. Stella and I went and got some berries to eat.

I'm starting to wonder if there is a person on this lonely island. I look up and see sparrows flying over my head as I think of a plan to get of this island but no my mind has gone completely blank it's telling me to look around this island instead. I look to my left and see the bright orange sun going down like an light bulb. I grabbed a stick off the shore and draw a picture in the soft sand. Stella comes and falls asleep on me.

As I listen I hear gibbons and orangutans shouting and owls hooting away in the dark gloomy forest. I hear Stella snoring like a pig so loud I can't even get to sleep. Slowly I start to close my eyes. In the morning I wake up and still hear Stella but I can't stop itching my arms because I have a million itchy bites all over me.when I look right in front of me I see...

Enormous sandy bear feet Right next to my face. I slowly look up and see a man,I get up but I also have the goose bumps. I look at him and realise that he is an old Japanese man with grey hair and brown shaggy pants with a dark green belt and a knife slotted in.

Finally.. I knew I was not alone I knew it I knew it. Now that I'm not alone I have someone to talk to. Right now I have an adventure ahead and a mission  to find my parents. As I ask for his name he said "me Kensuke".


                           By Annika reed





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